Alisa asked:


i wrote this song please tell me what you think! like what improvements and such i can make!!

watch the colors of the keldiescope
watch them fade to every shade of grey

we are all just the sum of everyone else
your bullets shoot me down
penetrating the sight of a true test
she bleeds for the words we speak
we’r watching
just watching

Woah oh! Woah oh!
the values of strength
are just to far away
Woah oh! Woah oh!
there will never be a day
Woah oh!
a refuge of love will be the savior
but only for today

we keep trying to come to the surface
your eyes judge me around
sentecing the idea of a new day
she screams the words we think
we’r destroying
always destroying

Woah oh! Woah oh!
the values of strength
are just to far away
Woah oh! Woah oh!
there will never be a day
Woah oh!
a refuge of love will save us
but only for today

watch the colors of the keldiescope
watch them fade to every shade of grey

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